Monday, September 28, 2015

9/28 Blood Moon Monday

Welcome back from the weekend! Hope you all had fun at the fall festival and checked out the "Blood Moon."

Today we are going to give feedback to each other on our spooky short stories. I will be around to put a grade in for your rough draft as well. First, lets watch this video to help us think about why we should revise.


How should we revise and what are we looking for? Use the 'comment' feature on google docs when giving any feedback, instead of physically writing or changing someone's work. Lets focus on revising and editing using the following chart:

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